找短文毛病<初二>

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/02 13:26:07
短文背景:我上星期日朋友生日了,我有事不能去,我拖朋友给他带礼物.要说明自己什么原因没去. 大家注意时态啊.
Dear Susan,
Did you have a good time at the party? l'm so sorry l couldn't go to your party.Because l had to take English lessons. Please didn't angry with me. But h gived you a gift. My friends showed you my gift. l go you your next birthday party when you next party came along.

gave,谁发明了新字gived?分词是have given.
But I have given you a gift. My friends showed you my gift.不通！However, I did ask my friend to bring you a gift. Do you like it?
最后一句，I promise you that I will go to your next birthday party."when it comes"是赘句。

Please didn't angry with me 改为 Please don't be angry with me.
But h gived you a gift h什么意思？
最后一句改为l will go to your next birthday party when it comes

Dear Susan,
Did you have a good time at the party? l'm so sorry that I couldn't go to your party.Because l had to take English lessons. Please don`t be angry with me. But I have gived you a gift. My friends showed you my gift. l will go to your next birthday party when your next party come along.

这样比较好：
Dear Susan,
Did you have a good time at the party? l'm so sorry that l couldn't go to your party.This is because l had to take English tuitions. Please don't be angry with me.However,I have gived you a gift